Final Draft of Women's Work

   Nowadays, women's work is a double-faced coin. I think it is very important if she could arrange her life between her outside work and work at home.

  

   Some people agree with women's work, because they see that she could help her husband by getting money. The money will raise their living-standard.

   Some women think that when they work, they will be independent. It means that they don't want anyone to give them money or take care of them. They think they could apply all the requirements of life and live a better life, just when they themselves go to work.

   There is another opinion of people who are against women's work. They say that when she works, she will go home tired. She won't have spare time to do her home duties, like bringing up her children, cooking and cleaning. She also doesn't have time to take care of her husband and children.

   Some women when they go to work, they become nervous and angry all the time. Others have some diseases like pressure. All these things don't give her some kind of stability in her and her family's life.

   Finally, sometimes I'm with women's work but most of time I'm against it. I feel that women should relax themselves from working outside home and to leave this hard work to men. It's men's duty to work and men should know that it's their responsibility to bring money.

First Draft''women's work''

   Nowadays, women's work is a double-faced coin. I think it's very important if she could arrange her life between her outside work and work at home.

  

   Some people agree with women's work, because they see that she could help her husband by getting money. The money will raise their living-standard.

   Some women think that when they work, they will be independent. It means that they don't want anyone to give them money or take care of them. They think they could apply all the requirements of life and live a better live, just when they themselves go to work.

   There is another opinion of people who are against women's work. They say that when she works, she will go home tired. She won't have spare time to do her home duties, like bringing up her children, cooking and cleaning. She also doesn't have time to take care of her husband and children.

   Some women when they go to work, they become nervous and angry all the time. Others have some diseases like pressure. All these things don't give her some kind of stability in her and her family's life.

   Finally, sometimes I'm with women's work but most of time I'm against it. I feel that women should relax themselves from working outside home and to leave this hard work to men. It's their duty to work and they should know that it's their responsibility to get money.



Outline of Women's Work

Introduction:
              -Nowadays, women's work is a double faced coin. I think it is very important if she could arrange her life between her outside work and work at home.

Body:
       1-Why do people agree with women's work?
                   -To be independant            
                   -To help her husband to get money.
                   -To live a better life 
       2-Why do other people disagree with women's work?
                   -She will be tired.
                   -She has no spare time.
                   -She can't take care of her husband and children.

Conculsion:
       I'm with women's work in sometimes and I'm against it in other times.         

                                  Final Draft

                                 Air pollution

   Pollution is becoming a serious problem all over the world especially in Egypt. Pollution affects  air, water, soil and many other things.
   Air pollution is the chemicals, particulates or biological materials that are introduced by humans and their products into the atmosphere.


   Air pollution is caused by smoke of industries, open-air waste burning, burning fuel of the transportation and smoking which all go directly to the air.
   In my opinion, transportation is the main reason for air pollution because in Egypt there are many kinds of vehicles which burn fuel and produce a huge amount of smoke in the air. Some industrial factories also that were built in the cities which omit smoke. There is another reason which is open-air waste burning such as burning rice straw or burning rubbish. At last smoking itself and different types of chemicals and dust are also reasons for air pollution.


   The most dangerous result to air pollution is The Global Warming. What is also called Green House effect which means that the temperature of the two poles becomes higher which leads to ice melting. It is a disaster!!
   Air pollution not only causes acid rains and smog, but it also harms humans; it causes many diseases like cancer, respiratory and reproductive effects. Air pollution also leads to Ozone Depletion.


   There are many solutions to stop air pollution such as, elimination of fossil fuels,also trying to reduce emissions of industrial gases from factories. The Minister of Environment should find ways to reduce and recycle one's own products.


   Finally, all of us should cooperate to stop the air pollution from increasing and hurting our health in Egypt.

  Air pollution

   Pollution is becoming a serious problem all over the world especially in Egypt. Pollution affects on air, water, soil and many other things.
   Air pollution is the chemicals, particulates or biological materials that are introduced by humans and their products into the atmosphere.


   Air pollution is caused by smoke of industries, open-air waste burning, burning fuel of the transportation and smoking which all go directly to the air.
   Transportation is the main reason for air pollution because in Egypt there are many kinds of vehicles which burn fuel and produce a lot amount of smoke in the air. Some industrial factories also were built in the cities which produce smoke. There is another reason which is open-air waste burning such as burning rice straw or burning rubbish. At last smoking itself and different types of chemicals and dust are also reasons for air pollution.


   The most dangerous result to air pollution is The Global Warming or what is also called Green House effect which means that the temperature of the two poles becomes higher which leads to ice melting and it is a disaster!!
   Air pollution not only causes acid rains and smog, but it also harms humans; it causes many diseases like cancer, respiratory and reproductive effects. Air pollution also leads to Ozone Depletion.


   There are many solutions to stop air pollution such as, elimination of fossil fuels,also try to reduce emissions of industrial gases from factories. The Minister of Environment should find ways to reduce and recycle one's own products.


   Finally, all of us should cooperate to stop the air pollution from increasing and hurting our health in Egypt.

Draft of the essay

Air pollution

The air pollution:

• The meaning of air pollution.

Causes:

• Industries
• Open-air waste burning
• Transportation (burning fuel)
• Smoking
• Different types of chemicals and dust

Effects:

• Green House effect 
• Global Warming
• Ozone Depletion
• It causes acid rains ang smog
• It harms human beings (it causes cancer,respiratory and reproductive effects)

Solutions:

• Elimination of fossil fuels
• Try to reduce emissions of industrial gases
• Finding ways to reuse and recycle one's own products

The Ministry of Environment should take many procedures to save air from its pollutants. 

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